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title: "Year 5 English - Persuasive Texts: Adverts to visit Darwen"
url: "https://darwenstjames.co.uk/news/2024-12-12-year-5-english-persuasive-texts-adverts-to-visit-darwen-2"
school: "Darwen St James’ C of E Primary Academy"
---

# Year 5 English - Persuasive Texts: Adverts to visit Darwen

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Year 5 were lucky enough to have the opportunity to read our persuasive writing to a Brand Director at Merlin Attractions this week!  We based our writing on some adverts for Legoland and Thorpe Park, and Nick from Merlin was really impressed with our understanding of how advertising works and was persuaded to visit Darwen by our fabulous emotive writing and our offers to book now!

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